Tell me wise man if you have ever,
loved someone and for so long,
that thought and reason have to sever
a vein that love has now made wrong.
For loss of purpose is one thing
and burning hate is quite another,
the rhyme of the sages unto me sing,
like a child is lulled on by its mother,
“sleep my angel do not feign,
wakefulness in the midst of dark,
leave these tears, forget the pain,
no matter how hard they may depart”.
Are not these words thyne O wise one
and those you told me long ago,
“love is like an eternal sun,
that waits to set for those who know,
and those that wait for it come,
on them shall this sun never set”.
I waited until I was finally done,
and an empty yesterday is what I regret.
Although my bed she warms today,
just flesh and sounds and nothing more,
I hate her I do regret to say,
for this wait has closed an open door.
Look at me O wise old man,
mirror or not, what have you done,
look at what you made me do
look at what you made me shun,
cry at what you made this fate,
lament at what you made me give,
all this love now turned to hate,
and in this hate we have to live.
“Soliloquy is a panacea for aporia, but what of the solution that comes too late?”
Very profound thoughts. Even with my limited capabilities of poetry, I shall honestly admit: I’m mesmerized by the words.
Thank you, really, I’m flattered.
Lovely , should I say
Thank you my good man, always an honor having being complimented by you.
I love the intensity that is wrapped within your words…Wow…I’m mesmerized by your words.Your words always gives color to the lifeless image of the ignorant man…keep on sharing.
Thank you so much, I’m pleased to know you liked my work, and rest assured, there are many more posts to come.
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Amazing and so worthy of praise
Thank you so much.
It flows so beautifully 🙂 I enjoyed reading it! Thanks for stopping by at my blog to read my poems too, much appreciated! 🙂
Thank you so much, and you’re welcome.
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You are so talented! I wish to write this well someday. 🙂
Thank you so much, I’m sure you’re already better than me and you don’t know it yet.
Many lines resonate including: “For loss of purpose is one thing
and burning hate is quite another”
Thank you Melanie, I’m glad you liked it.
Great post! And thanks for recently following my blog!
Take care
-Marlee
Thank you Marlee, and you’re welcome.
Another beautiful poem. I was completely enthralled.
Thank you, as am I by your appreciation.
Truly heartfelt and so beautifully written! After grief’s journey on the other end of that path, the sun will shine again.
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Thank you so much, and you are of course welcome.
Regards,
Osama.
great intensity of words..have you seen the movie “before midnight”? the poem kind of goes with that film.
Thank you, no I have not, but I’m guessing its one I should. 😀