9 thoughts on “Akaasi 22: The Pakistani Dream

  1. I like poems being symphonies and people being the orchestra. Your poems are beautiful. Keep it going. Thanks for checking out my work too, I really appreciate it.

  2. I don’t write poems.
    Or so i often say,
    I don’t write poems.
    Not even for a day,
    I don’t write poems.
    I hope that its okay,
    I don’t write poems.
    they’re stupid. They smell. They’re Gay.

    be sure to read my short poem about world travel… I do some funky stuff but this was a real step in the new direction for me and i wanna know what you think!


  3. Beautifully written. It reminds me of flash fiction but for poetry. You told a story with just a few well-worded lines. I love it.

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