That we may saunter amidst
yet fields of hanging skies ungrey
by dint of askance might I deem
this frolick strangest sans gusto.
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That we may saunter amidst
yet fields of hanging skies ungrey
by dint of askance might I deem
this frolick strangest sans gusto.
Poems & People 
Certainty a dirty word, so keep it under your breath ?
A hidden comedian here maybe? 🙂
You lost me completely. Would you care to broach?
Somehow managed to reblog by accident…
I hope my previous post explained my take on piece. I read so many, “that’s wonderful” type of comments and well, thought I’d enter into that mine field… Meaning 🙂
Reblogged this on poems: 'lax rhetorica' and commented:
That we move through life hoping the grey will give way to certainty, by the effort of the askance off kilter poet, but that attempt at certitude may also be folly, hence keep it under your breath… Sans gusto (wind/muchness).
I hope this clarifies things.
darren
Whether by accident or choice, I do appreciate your interest in this piece Darren. As for the mine field you needn’t worry much, I don’t think I’m a good writer either. 😀
It was very much my first, gut response. And I’d have to disagree, I was trying to pay compliment to non banal with a none banal comment.
If I was way off base, as long as you’re fine with that, I am.
Wasn’t it Durer who misunderstood italian books on perspective, only to through doing so invent a new idea of perspective…
Hahaha I wish I could find it in my will to disagree with you, but I feel you and I would only partake in over analyzing a subject matter so simple. Perspective is indeed attendant to caprice.
You’re an amazing writer and I look forward to everyone of your posts!
Tara
Thank you so much Tara. I needed a little back up. 😀
Wow – I am no poet but I love reading it and this was worth the time!
Mich, is that short for Michelle? Regardless, I thank you for your time and kind words. I like the idea of your blog.
Regards,
Osama
Hi Osama – yes Mich short for Michelle.
Thank so much for stopping by 😉
You are welcome.
😀
I love ‘hanging skies ungrey’ magnificent description.
Thank you so much, I seem to have pulled that one right out of the air (all puns intended). Talk about serendipity. 😀