Deign to draw, I! this divulging breath,
I draw compare too, pray of those needs,
yours, then mine, too our lives, zenith,
fate unto will, by fault doth leads.
Didst thou fail to gaze this way,
or ego faltered thy in that falling?
May thou endure forever I pray,
May thou live forever my darling.
Whence did I swear upon each branch,
to keepest count of all dying Robbins?
nor once didst thou relent thy staunch
culling of those joyful innocent sins.
Of all that I may draw thus now,
of life this end, of love this bow.
May thou live until the end of days,
I pray thou endure forever my grace.
“So that thou may suffer a sliver of my anguish, I pray that thou live forever, forever in regret, forever in guilt.”
Beautifully expressed!
Thank you so much Morgan.
Reblogged this on stuartcrossley's Blog.
Thank you Stuart, you’re too kind.
Reblogged this on stuartcrossley's Blog.
I am awarding you the Blog of the Year Award 2013 as an expression of my gratitude for following “The Journal of Wall Grimm” blog. You can see the post here: http://wp.me/p41c99-hx If you don’t accept awards, that’s no problem at all. Awarding you is my way to thank you and it is of no insult to me if you decline.
Thank you very much, I’m flattered by this award, and I hope you realize that it really does mean something to me.
Regards,
Osama Iftikhar
poemsandpeople
You’re welcome! So glad to have offered it to you. Take care, my friend.
I shall indeed, and hope too that you shall do the same.
I like this piece. Its succinct … its poignant, its treacherous, yet at the same time, innocent.
Thank you Aainaa, I am pleased to inform you, that in comprehending this poems intent, you are correct on all counts.
Most of all, which I didn’t mention here, is ‘Love’, but that goes without saying. Thank you for these words Osama
And thank you, for the appreciation.
Why do you follow me? your writing is so above mine… I feel unworthy. Thank you so much!
It is only by finding others that we can have others find us. I think your writing is good, and you’re welcome.
Thank you for reading & for writing
Snowy greetings from Berlin,
Alexander Booth
You’re welcome. and thank you Alexander.