To whom shall I confess my peril
of that which doth with ease elude
a grasp of thought I fail inveril,
a moment left in soft delude.
To which way must I turneth blind,
from faded thoughts must I digress,
when all I live for is left behind,
thus know I not of days progress.
I fail to see at times and more
I fail to comprehend at best,
the passive grain that is my shore
to march of oceans valiant lest.
Heave shall burdens I ephemerally,
in eternal circles divine tragedy.
No longer can the end of days
instill that fear of heavens plays.
“If hopelessness is my abode, then carpe diem shall I plunge into this fate of faithlessness.”
I would like to borrow your IP for my upcoming death metal song of the same title.
😉
Are you serious? Since when did you start singing? 😀
Since I don’t know. lol
Btw the rhyme is legit.
Legitimacy is something essential when it comes to poetry. But, really it is an honor to be read by my own people for a change. Thank you.
Marvelous Post 🙂 Blessings~
Thank you.
Blessed be all under the sky.
To which way must I turneth blind,
from faded thoughts must I digress,
when all I live for is left behind,
thus know I not of days progress.
-There is solitude and sorrow in your verse today. Beauty too, but such sadness.
For every moment of joy, I delve in a moment melancholy. I wish my words could heal, but instead they cradle my loss.
Beautiful and yes… somewhat melancholy.
i noticed you read a post… Thanks man and your poem are good.
You’re welcome, and thank you.
poem is good*
deep within, turn thee
I didn’t quite get that.
the thought to the question
Oh, well put :D, I would turn deep within, but I fear, sometimes I’m just too facile.
In all fairness, isn’t the minimalist juxtapositions the answer 🙂
In all fairness, humble pie usually is :D, juxtaposing minimalism only leads to more self directed inquiries, and frankly my dear, sometimes a circuitous train of thought is just not worth it 😀
then pie it is ! Shall I serve that with Champagne 😉
Haha I’m more of a wine lover, but I’ll make an exception just this once.
Well if its from Australia, it’s just sparkling wine. Have a fabulous weekend 😉
Thank you, and may you have a splendid one as well.
Regards,
Osama Iftikhar
Beautiful writing! “…from faded thoughts must I digress, when all I live for is left behind…”
Poignant…and real. Love it! And thanks so much for following my blog…I truly appreciate it…I’ll be following yours as well.
Thank you so much, and you’re welcome.