Amidst a flurry of dropping blossoms pale,
I watch these moth wings fragrant so much
turning white in a lifeless sail,
the arms and branches praying as such.
In wait for autumn, the progeny of colors,
while patiently all the watchful turn old.
Would it be too much, to envy the pallor
of fleeting lovers drifting in the cold?
An empty shade, with receding light,
another hour has come and gone,
another moment, the blossoms in flight,
fallen, found love, waiting, found dawn.
“The falling blossoms in autumn are not to be pitied but envied, for they embrace death while waiting for their love. Their color, verdure, and vivacity, all is for what they love, all is for whom they embrace.”
Wow. Just wow.
Thank you.
I will have your language in mind as I prune the progeny of colors growing in pots on my porch this morning. Lovely images of blossoms. Thanks for this.
Thank you Michael, that is a lovely compliment.
Beautiful
Thank you.
Beautiful…you have just given me the sweetest taste of spring time.Lovely
Thank you, I’m glad to be of service, albeit it was the taste of autumn more than spring that I was vying to incite. 😀
Beautifully written.
Thank you, you’re too kind.
I enjoy your use of uncommon words. Thank you, Deborah
Thank you Deborah.
Stunningly beautiful. I like it!
Thank you, I’m flattered.
It’s so damn beautiful… :0)
Thank you so much.
You know you use a really beautiful and unexpected selection of words. If your words had been the more commonly slung together ones this may have been ordinary but using the ones you did made it extraordinary. Very lovely 🙂
Thank you Shauna, I am humbled by your kind words.
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Well written piece. Thanks.
Thank you very much, sorry for the late reply.
Very vivid. I was floating from one line to the next.
Hats off.
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Thank you Deon, thank you for the business card, I’ll be sure to visit your website, and if I shall ever be in the mood for poetry I’ll visit your amazon page as well. What a profound quote too.
I can feel the changes of life of the blossoms coming to me.
Thank you, I’m glad you do.
This is amazing!
Thank you so much, I’m terribly sorry for the late reply.
No problem 🙂
That’s really beautiful. Thanks for checking mine attempts out, My only attempts at poetry have been in the last few weeks so am loving how the real poets do it 🙂
Thank you so much, I’m very sorry for the late reply. Helen, I feel there are no real or amateur poets, as long as you feel good while expressing yourself in the written form, you’re as good as one gets.
very beautiful!
Thank you so much Kizia, I must apologize for the late reply.
no problem 🙂
brilliantly expressed……… loved it…
Thank you very much, you’re too kind.
You’ve really nailed this, form, function, particularly mood…great read!
Thank you, thank you very much.
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Thank you, it is such an honor.
You deserved it! 🙂
This is awesome! Thank you kindly for dropping by wePoets, it’s much appreciated. We’d be happy to showcase your work should you want to share. 🙂
Thank you, and you’re welcome. Please feel free from any obligation coming from my side. As far as I’m concerned, words and thoughts are meant to be shared.
Change your background…I can not even force myself to read.
Thank you Suhani, I’ll keep your suggestion and concern in mind the next time I shall change my blog theme and background, albeit I find it quite strange that you were unable to read the content, the majority feedback I got from my readers about this background alluded to the better visibility it juxtaposed on the written text.
It’s not about visibility…I can see and read with the bold text…but it just doesn’t feel right to your eyes and hence I am not able to concentrate…I read two lines an no more!
Thank you, I’ll put on a new background as soon as possible, the opinions of a reader are of paramount importance.
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Osama Iftikhar