With every passing day and with each fleeting moment,
I see how my world is falling, falling down on me.
With every wailing cry and with each unheard lament,
I see how my world is falling, an abyss is all I see.
A garden of earthly delights that I once called my own,
the songs of muted angels, in an eternal reprise,
the shrine of euphoria supreme and its sovereign throne,
O! Departed days of wonder will you not return please?
For I remember my valley from a time of peace and love,
the olives grew purple dark and the meadows evergreen,
with flowers of war wilting beneath the abode of doves,
was this world an honest truth or nay!, a wishful dream?
Where once our monuments stood, on grounds hallowed great,
and lofty rose the aspiration of our nation just,
today they crumble down all owed to a deserving fate,
rest our mortal dreams betrothed to unfound dust.
The slowly dying embers have turned to ashes here,
and pains me how no different, they are from darkly doom,
for the rushing moment of today shall not hardly care,
shall not recall glory past but presently dying bloom.
My world is falling bit by bit, piece by piece, day by day,
and the memories of burning rain scorch this grieving mind,
the walkway to an endless dawn, a dawn though weary grey,
lights the corners of my dreams, for tomorrow must be blind.
“I realize that all good things must end, but why mine, why now and why in a manner such as this?”
This is like a beautiful play…sadly and happily somehow at the same time.
Thank you Donna, you have humbled me with such kind words.
Very well crafted poem. Thanks. Will be back to see more of your work.
Thank you. And feel welcome to do so.
Without words…you did the job for me. Beautiful and solemnly so. Thank you too for taking the time to visit my (infant) blog and share a little humbling support. God Bless and I look forward to reading your work (when I have time-outs from parenting…here, there, anytime and where…they randomly appear for me enabled. I am new to this and still working out the kinks and riding the waves. Therefore, I sincerely appreciate to have the fellowship of truly real talent and inspiration.
– Elizabeth Dryden | autismcafe.org
Thank you Elizabeth, you’re kind words have humbled me. You’re welcome, and feel free by all means. Stop by any time, and speak your mind.
If you ever need any help, you can contact me on my email address, stated on the “about” page. Happy parenting, and all the best.
Regards,
Osama
Astounding imagery, Sir! Question: Why no stanzas? Is that to assimilate the falling effect? Thank you kindly for visiting TheInkJester, I appreciate the support!
Thank you Mr. Sutherland, as a reply I shall simply state, “for that is the way I write”. I did not intend to assimilate anything, and you’re welcome, you can be sure of my support in any venture you partake.
That is a beautiful poem! May I have your permission to put a tune to it?
Thank you, and please, by all means.
Your beautiful poetry fills the mind and heart. I hope you are speaking in the abstract, but I sense you are not. If not I am deeply sorry.
I am not a poet nor a writer, just a person whose head is sometimes filled with words, to my amazement, I recently began to write down. Just like this morning while sitting outside drinking a cup of coffee.
Thank you for taking the time to read one of my posts.
May you always maintain your true gift to write so beautifully!
Thank you, and please, you needn’t feel sorry for me, there are no lives lived sans sorrow.
You’re welcome, you write beautifully, and the sincere persona of a poet is incomplete without his/her ebullition’s.
Thank you again Sheila, and I do hope the best for you as well.
Regards,
Osama Iftikhar
very well written.. sad and beautiful
Thank you, you’re too kind.
Another beautiful one! I wonder what took me so long to visit your blog..
All I would like to say is enjoy life..God did not promise an easy and soothing life..HE just said it would be WORTH every moment.. π π
Thank you again, and believe me when I write, “I do enjoy life”, but you must understand, poetry is best written with the ink of pathos, and the pen of sentiments.
That is nice to hear! π
To be honest, to an extent agreed π
Okay… so I’ve read several of your poems and they are all quite groovy, but this poem caused me to melt a bit! Good stull. Will enjoy following your work- You are really good!
Thank you so much, I’m gladdened to know you enjoy my work.
what a sad and lovely poem! thanks for following my blog
Thank you, and you’re welcome.
Here is the music for this poem… I didnt use the entire poem for it is quite lengthy. I hope you like it.
Oh My God, I love it, thank you, this is such an honor, and may I just state for the record, you have done it more than justice.
Regards,
Osama Iftikhar
My pleasure!
goodness its so beautiful, made me teary eyed.
if only I could write like you… keep on writing sir
Thank you, thank you very much, you’re too kind.