In the valleys so dark, and skies that rue,
I see my nation, my people, my children,
among their legacy, but mingles the hue,
of a purpose left wasted in egos belligerent.
More than their joys, I have witnessed tears,
miserable reminders how fallen they are,
but more than their patience, indolence I fear
has led them to slumber ignominiously par.
Seeing them defeated, something is awake,
a pondering, curious figure of black,
a visage so horrid, I turn for Gods sake,
and look to my east, yet it looks to my back.
Its gentle steps I can hear, not wanting
and its fingers pondering through the very skin
of every shadow standing silent and taunting,
but holding its breath as if living were a sin.
Its serpentine tongue slithering at my feet,
watchful its gaze, while scratching the soil,
and the fuming horns being thus from the heat
while its whipping tail now drops from a coil.
The bleeding crows that hang from the boughs,
I imagine the fear now frozen in their eyes
must also be prevalent in my own that bow
down to the dust where my destiny lies.
My flesh being torn at the seams of its ponder,
hot blood dangling from the vines of its crown,
and all the while it is I who must wonder,
when will the insatiable beast fall down.
I embrace you, my curse, my wound, my fall,
feed to your fill, until I have withered away,
I forgive you, my nation, my people, my all,
rest from a caprice until the end of all days
“As if it were not enough to watch myself die, I must leave while knowing that my people shall never awaken.”
Painfully beautiful!
Thankyou.
This is beautiful. AJM
Thank you AJM, you’re too kind.
A dramatic portrayal, passionately exposed with melancholy and fear. Evocative language and strong voice. Very well done.
Thank you ever so much, I am humbled by these kinds.
Mesmerizing…well done indeed.
Thank you Charlene, always a pleasure.
Beautiful.
You are too kind.
Wow!! That spoke to my heart…Great job! ~Regina
Thank you Regina, really, this is all the emolument I look forward to.
Thanks for following my blog! I am certainly happy to return the favor! Love your writing, and look forward to future posts!
You’re welcome Jordan, and thank you.
wow, terrific piece! thankyou for visiting my blog, nice to meet you. you are very talented, I read this overand over. Kind regards, Baldy 🙂
Thank you so very much, how kind of you?!, and of course you’re welcome.
Such a classic style of poetry, timeless with a cadence that sweeps one along on it’s crest. It has been a long time since I read something this complex and deep and, well, just plain amazing. Bravo.
I want to also thank you for following “Beyond The Cracked Window”, I am honored. You might also like its sibling site “Through The Cracked Window”. Thanks again.
Stephen.
You’re welcome Stephen, and I must thank you for the wonderful compliments, it would be an honor to have a look at the other site you have alluded to.
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Thank you. You are too kind.