An evening is due, and so is a word
among the flurry of the white moths wings.
The wind languid, the returning bird,
and the song of the sunset it sings.
Me and you, and the night insidious
painting our love on the fading light,
drooping shadows and thoughts assiduous,
of the vanishing sun and the fleeting sight.
Come hither love, and partake embrace
not a soul that can make an anxious cry,
a fire less night, its cold we must face
and the words I hear companion to a sigh.
“We lived for love, and time our foe,
our abode the home of the fireflies,
we saw the sun and then the dark,
and our breaths our only goodbye’s.”
“The best thing about falling in love is the moment before anything is said, but sometimes time escapes and the first words also happen to be the last.”
This is one of my favorites from you. Beautiful, touching… great work.
I’m pleased to know that, thank you.
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could not resist displaying this beautiful work on Heart. thank you.
Thank you so much.
Lovely stuff indeed!
Why Thank you.
elegantly painted lines!
Thank you.
Beautiful, nice flow.
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Thank you for visiting my weblog. Your poems are beautiful.
You’re welcome, and thank you.
Beautifully lyrical with splendid phrasing. The tone of assonance throughout is very pleasing on the ear when read aloud. Very well done.
Thank you very much, you’re too kind.
Excellent…
Thank you.
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You’re welcome, and I would gladly dole out any help you may require.
Thank you for following , I like this one, still got many more to read , you are very good , I’m still new at blogging, but I’m very glad you liked my poem 🙂
You’re welcome to any compliments I can dole on you, and also to drop by and have a look. You may be new, but you are very good, Im glad I found your blog.
That’s so encouraging, many thanks, I like to keep it simple, english is not my mother language, but nevertheless it doesn’t stop me from writing 🙂 It makes me happy to find that someone as good as you find my writings good , thanks again :))
Great poem!
Thank you.
I love how the way you personate environment in this poet.
Thank you so much.
Thank you for following. Your poems are wonderful! I can learn a lot from you.
You’re welcome, and I assure you, we can all learn a lot from each other.