If I could rescind from what I regret
I fear there is nothing I could recall,
for when paragons opposing do collide,
kingdoms of necessity finally fall.
And those that stray farthest from the light
cast the shadows deep and tall,
yet I stood for the better of the best
and took the repute of the ones who fall.
How goodly did I feign apathy,
how hollow but rotund was my call,
and knighted was I for embracing the dark,
hearing the sound of life beyond the wall.
They say I hurt for I love to bleed
so they smile when I bleed for them all,
yet I take what they give and hide from the light
my muse this silence, my shelter this night.
But hear me, O Mortals! for the day shall come
when all your idols among all your cries
will lift not a finger for all you give
and then you shall know how false hope dies.
Yea! look to the horizon call me forth,
find me in the truth and among the lies,
for death is to me but a vessel of life,
and where hope must fall I must rise
“Perhaps, there is hope within us all, but when that hope dies, we must become more than what we are, and we must rise.”
I love the words. Very inspiring! 🙂
Thank you
Im usually never down but lately has been horrible! I read this and your one thought on it and tears streamed down my face……I MUST RISE! Thanks
I am glad to have been of service to you, you’re welcome.
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very very good
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This post was purely awesome! I will never forget these wonderful words of encouragement – they are now etched in my mind and heart as well… thanks!
You’re welcome Charlene, and really it is I who should be thanking you.
Wow! This gave me chills. Absolutely beautiful writing!!!
Thank you, really, it pleases me that you enjoyed it.
Thanks for liking my poem, ‘the fifth narrative’. I like ‘Rise’, makes one stop and ponder…
You’re welcome, and I’m glad you did.
Thank you for your visit. And than you for the words you have shared here. It is refreshing to read poetry with a sense of musicality, meter, and purpose. Some truly wonderful images in your work.
You’re welcome, and thank you so much.
I was compelled to read this poem over and over again – so musically written and has wonderful meaning… Bravo!
Thank you, you’re too kind.
Thank you for visiting, the like of my post “Internal Cover Up” and deciding to follow me.
You’re welcome.
You are truly a gifted poet, using a genre that many (including myself) were inspired by, and still are amazed by to this day. The genre? That’s too intellectual for me to answer properly, but I mean to say classic poetry or the like. Thank you for coming to my strange (but well-intended) little free-form, barely-edited, hypen-using corner! Thank you for sharing your work, I will definitely visit often. Well done!
You’re welcome, and thank you very much, you’re too kind.
We nominate you Liebster Blog Award. Please check it at http://daylighttune.wordpress.com/2013/05/17/liebster-blog-award-2/ 🙂
Thank you so much, once again it is an absolute honor.
You are most welcome
Deep. Very deep indeed. I feel a tinge of spirituality in your poems and that’s something rare and highly praiseworthy.
‘And those that stray farthest from the light
cast the shadows deep and tall’
‘But hear me, O Mortals! for the day shall come
when all your idols among all your cries
will lift not a finger for all you give
and then you shall know how false hope dies.’
Thank you so much Qandeel, rest assured, any spirituality reflected in my work is unintended, perhaps my pen has a slight case of the Midas’s touch. Regardless, why does your name sound familiar?
You deserve each compliment completely. Spirituality is often unintended my brother. That’s the beauty of it. I just felt the truth of mortal beings and about-to-end life in your poem. Sometimes there’s a romantic (or kind of heart-broken) edge to your poems but the multiplicity of the meanings is more like ‘to each his own’.. I enjoy poems on what we call ‘ishq-e-haqiqi’ which you must be aware of. Wishing to read more on that from your pen.
Well, i don’t know why does it sound familiar but maybe you’ve heard my name as one of your old fellows suggested your page, considering my inclination towards poetry and prose.
Yes, I am aware of the concept, and in any case feel free to thank my old fellow for being kind enough to suggest my page to you.
Regards
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This is from one of my new-found friends. I love his poetry and his poetry is so truthful!
Sorry for the late reply Pastor, for some reason I overlooked this comment, thank you so much again.
Thanks for liking my poems and subscribing to my blog. Your poems resonate with truth and are sometimes scary, but that’s one of the reasons I like them so much. Sandra
You’re welcome Sandra, thank you for the compliments, I’m utterly flattered.