Fallow, arid and hostile is this sand,
unforgiving, malevolent and forbidden is the land
of caravans, bivouacs, mirages and oasis
where khamaseen, simoom and sirocco are fanned,
no hope for life in this ossuary of time,
and here each drop of rain is a full gulp of wine,
even opuntia the worshiper of the sun
would rot in disdain lest even pestilence resign,
in this valley of death yet my love is awake,
somnambulism perhaps or perhaps for life’s sake,
with loneliness and misery, their bounties a’plenty,
still forbidden is the fruit, and the bough that I shake,
here a fallen man and whose will is now gone,
for chasing shadows, and the moon doth justly mon,
not to dream tonight but of the grainy ocean grey
which shall turn to gold with the coming dawn,
and it holds a promise, pledging a season new
of gardens in the desert sodden with pearls of dew,
all this man must, is sow his eager seeds
in the orchard not far, where once the apples grew,
although there are not few but countless who leave behind,
the chimera of a spring, a mirage they set out to find,
this man, who is surely me, shall await for ever more
the Saharan apple season, while the rest may turn as blind.
“A chimerical account of how anything is possible as long as some one is willing to believe in it.”
Definitely a class
Thank you Sir
Beautifully put, yet again, Osama π
Regards,
As always, your simplicity in words is eloquence most venerated. I thank you Maryam.
Regards
a well spoken hope; a beautiful use of images creating a clear atmosphere which gives these words a world for their own,which is the charm of this poem besides its content. Hope the fallow land will soon be fertile π
Thank you, and I do hope as well π
Wow… stunning piece of work.
Thank you, you are too kind
Beautiful poem.
Thank you so much, would you like to give any critique?
Oh lovely it is a beautiful poem so wonderful and written with true passion
I love it friend
its content is of high literary standards
Thank you so much, you are too kind.
no sir it is absolutely beautiful a expression
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You are too kind Emily, I am humbled by your graciousness
Your descriptive song transported me. Lovely piece.
You are too kind.
Love blooms even on barren ground. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you and well done.
Thank you so much, your appreciation means everything.
Nice
You summed it up quite nicely, thank you π
NIce use of images – the poem has a lyrical quality – the first four lines powerfully set the stage and the tone of the message the poem has to deliver.. Thanks for posting.
Thank you so much.